Saturday, June 9, 2012

Escape


Subtle
A flash of deep-running green
The faintest of ripples
My popper
Quietly evaporated

More trout sip than bass strike

Had I been off woolgathering
Drifting somewhere else with my thoughts
As I often do while fishing these waters
I’d have missed it

It wouldn’t have been the first time
Nor would it have been the last
But I didn't

A hard strip
A lift of the rod tip
Again
Subtle no longer

A cartwheel
A tailwalk
A slashing run downstream
A headshake

One last, desperate leap for freedom
Off

Hard, brave work
Rewarded by a slip of the hook
A long-line release
Untouched return to safe, comfortable depths

My popper
Quietly revaporated

Good for you, Mr. Bass
Good for you


12 comments:

  1. "Hard, brave work
    Rewarded by a slip of the hook"
    Sometimes, I'm happy when this happens...as they've earned it.
    A fine piece, Mike. A fine piece.

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  2. Absolutely, Erin. This post was inspired by exactly that feeling. A nice bass got away, yesterday, and all I could do was smile and say "Good for you."

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  3. Sometimes the acrobatics and pull on the end of the line is all the reward we need, or deserve.

    wonderfully written...awesome stuff!

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  4. Way more than we deserve, Sean. Way more.

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  5. Alrighty Mike, you really got me on this one. Great writing.

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  6. Thanks Howard. I really appreciate it.

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  7. Mike, I really enjoyed this! Sometimes all we need is or remember are those "Happy Hook Ups".

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  8. You're right, Mel. Those hookups lost are much more vivid in my memory than the fish I've brought to hand. Thanks for the reminder.

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  9. This year I've got a bit more obsessive about tracking those that self release. Not sure why. In my minds eye, they're all trophies and I like it that way.

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  10. I don't know that I obsess over them, but they do stay with me. Trophies all, indeed, all to be caught another day.

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  11. I identify with the long line release all too much. Nicely written.

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  12. Thanks, RR. And I have mastered the LLR.

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